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this sounds REAL nice
not much I would change if I were making necessarily; ion't listen to a lotta stuff like this but the entire track is very pleasing to listen to, especially when the percussion kicks in. obviously it's not super dynamic, which may stem from a lack of lyrics (hip hop is kinda hard to do as an instrumental lmao), but even then I'm still engaged the entire time
really tho I'm a huge fan

Lothyde responds:

Very cool

she's in love with the concept
jokes aside, i've always found this cover really pretty. you've got a really nice voice man. love it

wow. i don't have much bad to say about this. i love it
my only recommendation is that there be a bit more from 0:48 - 1:32, like a pad building up in volume and some other neat little details

default-taste responds:

thanks for the feedback! happy that you liked it!!

woa this is neat
ion't got much to say cuz it's just good. i like the pattern used throughout the song, that's definitely p neat
what i'd recommend next is adding some development throughout the song, as in introducing new melodies, like you're traveling to different parts of a city, for example. you did, however, do a very simple version of that with the contrast of the first half vs. the second half, so that deserves some credit
really cool man !! ur cookin and i like it

sounds like the settings menu of a super iconic game. this is GOOD
im loving the continuity between the parts. it feels like there's something connecting everything now and it makes the song feel so much more complete
i also really like the bells at 1:39; it adds so much to the song while being basic and only lasting for about 20 seconds. the subtle white noise in the background also tells me you paid attention to the subtle details
good stuff homie

yo????????
this song is so simple but so GOOD. i love the way this was executed. it's so weird but in every good way, ESPECIALLY 0:07 like MAN i wish i could make shit like that
only real thing i don't like is the "graininess" of the chords. i know it's a mod of beepbox so there's not much variety, but still, it'd be so awesome if u could find a way to make the tone smoother i guess ??
i really like the other lead that comes in at 0:52
this is so cool man

Pinkflamingo01 responds:

Aight. I will try and make it a bit less crowded! Thanks for commenting !

This beepbox alternative is actually great. I will try and find a way to remake this to try and make it sound a. ok. thanks for pointing this out

interesting thing you've tried here
composition-wise, the main thing i've noticed is the key signature, or seemingly lack thereof. for most of the time, it seems like it's in B minor, but in the cello section, there's a C natural, and tbh, i don't really like it. having accidentals is fine, but it feels like this song just kinda uses whatever notes it wants, which is usually fine, but as a beginner, i'd recommend you avoid accidentals and stick to the key signature unless you truly believe it belongs (song artists often use accidentals for a sudden change of mood or pace, but doing this right takes much time to master). i should give praise where it's due however. the accidentals are used BEAUTIFULLY here at 0:53. the B -> A# -> B -> C# is amazing, and definitely one of the best uses of accidentals in the entire song
more on composition, there's a lot of dissonant chords, which, much like accidentals, are incredibly difficult to use, so i'd try to avoid them while you're getting started out
the drums are good, and definitely one of the best parts of the song, but the main thing that bugs me is the amount of high end on the kick. it makes it sound less like a kick and more like a click with a bunch of low end, which is not what you want for most scenarios. this problem can easily be fixed with an EQ tho
the piano part suffers the most from the composition issues imo. it's not all bad, like the 0:53 i pointed out earlier, but it often feels like it has no continuity and it just doesn't make sense. this isn't always a bad thing, but here it definitely is a bad thing
there are a lot of smaller nitpicks i have, but for now, focus on the problems i mentioned above. they'll REALLY help you in the future

Anots responds:

tysm for your feedback :o
i'll work on a second project later, i will try to do my best and take a lot of attention on what you said. thank you again <3

i pray for a world where we get this as our elevator music instead of whatever stuff they put usually
nah but fr this kinda gives off lounge / elevator vibes and i am all for it. it's a nice lil thing to listen to and man it's just :) it makes me go :) yk
i find it very interesting, though, that you chose to make every section different, and i do believe it does add a certain quality to the song which i really like. since each section is based on a specific chord, it does make sense to have a bunch of different sections. however, i think it would be nice if the beginning section was slapped on the end again, just to give a sense of "completion" if you will. im not good with words but trust me it's cool
speaking of beginning, since this isn't really a loop, i think there should be some sort of proper beginning section. right now, it just goes straight into it, which i don't really think is a good way of putting your listener into it. for this kind of song, it's much more tolerable, but i feel like a short eight-ish second introduction'll do the trick just nice. just like one of the other sections but "calmer" or "less full" if you will
it's very funky tho !! i like it

very interesting sound you've gone for. i like the chords and bell-synth-thingy; those are what definitely stand out the most for me
the main issue here is the building of the song, or more appropriately, lack thereof. there is nothing that makes this song build. it's just the same thing for 2 minutes, which while not always a bad thing, is not too great in this particular style because it just ends up sounding repetitive, predictable, and boring
this does not mean the song is bad however; it's still good (again, the chords and bell stick out to me). in the future, i would advise having some variety through the song

carsidcarsick responds:

Thanks for the advice, I’ll keep that in mind in the future when I’m making music.

woah this is p cool
i like how simple the track is. it has the same melody for most of the song, which i like, but it keeps building on it, which i love. idk im just a sucker for that kinda stuff
honestly kinda feels like the credits song to a really good indie game. im just gettin that vibe from it
but yea this is cool !!!

Bosa responds:

thank you sm!

I may be stupid... yea.

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